The Green... Effect?
Contrary to previous reports, Variety are reporting that M. Night Shyamalan's latest spec script has been given the title The Green Effect, not The Green Planet. Don't get too used to it, though... it's about to change.
Having done the rounds of the studios and come up short, Shyamalan is heading back to do another draft which, reportedly, will include a retitling. He's taken onboard a raft of notes from the execs who nixed him, and according to Variety, he's going to be factoring these into Mark 2.
I'm not sure if I like this or not. Of course, allegations of indulgence dogged Lady in the Water, and they were, to a fairly large degree, founded, even while so much about the film showed great skill and intelligence - but taking notes from studio execs? Well... if the notes were vague "fix this, fix that" stuff then we're probably in line for a strong end result, but if they were specific "he should say this, then they should go and do that" stuff, maybe not so.
Only one friend of film ick has read anything from the original version of the script, and they weren't exactly in awe of what they read; having said that, their criticisms might be called wishy-washy, and as I said to them at the time, maybe a little biased. Not liking the script is one thing, but calling it a 'disaster' on the basis of an (admittedly fair-sized) excerpt... well, what's that old saying?
Ah yes: 90% of script writing is structure. And I believe that. And I believe that, yes, Shyamalan is very strong on structure, particularly the kind of structure you aren't going to fully appreciate if you don't read every scene.
I want to read The Green Planet/Effect because I want to judge for myself.
One last point from Variety's piece: if Shyamalan's next draft is picked up, he hopes to make the film before he gets on with his Avatar: The Last Airbender trilogy.